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Speak His Name on Memorial Day

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Sometimes I find it impossible to tell you in a meaningful way exactly how I feel about certain things. You have by now figured out that I am rarely at a loss for words, but there are times when the words don’t seem to convey what I want them to convey. I don’t want to sound like a damn Hallmark card, nor do I want to sound preachy. But when it comes to certain things – you either believe or you don’t.

I believe that God abhors war, but holds a special place in his heart for warriors.
I believe in heaven and I know “the streets are guarded by United States Marines” and the U.S. Air Force is responsible for the flight path of angels.
I believe that God holds the common soldier, sailor, airman, and Marine in the same high regard as the most elite of any of the warrior ranks.
I believe that God holds a peaceful place in heaven for those who cannot find peace within after serving here on Earth.
I believe that “there are no atheists in foxholes.”
I believe that angels walk among us in battle and they answer to the names “corpsman, medic, and doc.”
I believe that as long as I remember someone and speak his name then he still lives.
I believe that the dead hear their names and find comfort in our remembrance.

Memorial Day is about the men and women who died while in military service. I appreciate that some now wish to make it about all those who served and I’m happy to include them too. But when I speak my names on Monday, it will be the names of those who actually died in service.

Two of the names I will speak this year when I raise my flag are neither family nor friend. They are men who came to me in other ways:

Major Richard Kibbey, Missing in action near Mu Ghia Pass on the Laos/North Vietnam border. 6 February 1967. He was the copilot of Jolly Green 05 (tail #65-12779) which was shot down while attempting the rescue of a downed pilot. I’ve had his POW bracelet since 1973.
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Private Rolland F. Revels, 2nd Ranger Battalion, who died 6 June 1944, and is buried in Colleville Cemetery in France. On D-Day, Dog, Easy and Fox Companies landed at Pointe du Hoc and members of Able, Baker, and Charlie Companies landed at Omaha Beach. You’ll find a large number of those brave young men in Colleville. I don’t know Private Revels family. I found a picture of his tombstone while I was researching for one of my stories and his name spoke to me. I have named a fictional military base for him in one of my books, and now I will speak to him on Monday and thank him for his service.

Based on my very simplistic belief system, I’m sure you will know where to find me at dawn on Memorial Day. I’ll be raising my flag, and I’ll be speaking their names.

If you don’t know someone personally, or you don’t have an ancestor lost in service, you can click on any National Cemetery and pick a name to honor or click on an image of the Vietnam War Memorial and select a name from the wall.

The Best Beta Readers

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How would you feel if after months of hard work, your reader looked at you and told you that she didn’t like your lead character? In her words, “I hate her! She’s too accepting of her situation, she’s needy, and a wimp.” I was floored. That is so not what I was going for and definitely not how I saw the character. The simple truth was that I hadn’t done my job. I failed to put on paper, what I heard and saw in my head. My reader was only shown the external situation, not the internal conflict that I knew was occurring. I had become too close to my story and failed to share the details with my reader.

So what makes a good beta-reader and how do you find one? Finding a reader is rarely a problem. The real trick is finding a quality one. We all begin with our family or close friends, but they’re not always the best readers for us. One of my oldest friends loves to read and I shared my first book with her. Her praise was effusive. She laughed, she cried, and told me how much she loved it. But she was unable to share with me exactly what it was she loved about the story. There was also nothing about the story she didn’t like. No issues, no problems, and sadly – no real feedback. While my ego was stroked, the truth is that it wasn’t helpful to me. No matter how often I try to tell you how perfect I am, we all know I’m only mostly perfect.

Most writers will go through more than a few readers before they establish a core group of people who they can effectively communicate with. Most of them read the whole story, but some of them read only bits and pieces as I’m working. They are a pretty eclectic group. Three retired attorneys (and no, I have no idea why I know so many attorneys), my stylist, a literature teacher, a graphic designer, a gun shop employee, a crime lab employee, a librarian, two logistics specialists, two retired English teachers, a police officer, and two published authors. Many of them are ex-military. A combination of Air Force and Marines (not that you ever use the term ex with a Marine) and several with a security forces background. Six of my readers are men. While they may not be my target audience in every case, they look at things differently than women do and their feedback is often about more practical things. They also help me keep my male characters more true to the image I’m going for. My favorite Marine pointed out in one of stories that if my male lead was any kinder and gentler that he would be in danger of losing his standing in the “real man club.” Sensitive only goes so far, and I was crossing the line.

Good beta-readers ask questions and make notes as they read. They are curious about your characters and your settings. Often they are the people who notice your character sits twice without ever having stood up. Or worse, they have one too many hands. They catch the accidental name changes that happen: Carolyn becomes Caroline and Krista becomes Krystal. My lead character in Protecting Parker is Gray, but occasionally my fingers experienced dyslexia and I typed Gary. The betas had a field day with that one. They also find the missing words and wrong descriptions. Why is a happy guy glowering? Did you mean principal instead of principle? Why is he eating lunch in one sentence, but it’s a clear, cold night in the next one? My betas also point out things that they feel may be out of character. One of my favorite notes read, “You keep using the term, ‘she explained patiently.’ Why patiently? Aren’t these men supposed to be smart? Why are you making them look stupid? Or is she just being a bitch?” My male beta-readers could have cared less about that, but complained that I didn’t tell them enough about the things she was “patiently” explaining to them at the time.

Each of my readers brings something different to the mix. Dean is my tech guy and he corrects my terminology when I discuss anything in the computer, internet, or phone world. My weapons guy makes sure that I keep all my weapons and components straight. My logistics, cops, and ex-military point out flaws in their areas of expertise, and my civilians point out the things, as non-military, they didn’t get. And my attorneys – well, they are the detail oriented people that ask some of the most unique questions. One was curious about the dichotomy of my vampire believing in God. Our discussion of vampires and religion occurred over lunch one day, and in the end, I realized that once again I had failed to share the inner conflict of my character with the reader. The questions they ask, force me as a writer to do a better job of getting what’s in my head, on to the page.

The other thing to keep in mind is that you need to tell your beta-readers exactly what it is that you expect of them. Do you want them to make notes, do you want them to look at something specific, or is this a first read to see if the timeline makes sense? Do you want them to “rewrite” or simply suggest off to the side? If I send a section that I’m struggling with, I will sometimes ask for help and people are welcome to put a lot of ink on that paper. But when it arrives in a finished form, I’m not looking for a rewrite. I don’t mind suggestions when there’s a problem, but I hate it when someone thinks they should just rewrite my paragraph. I’d rather have someone say, “Perhaps this might be better as…” or “I heard it this way in my head…” On the other end of the scale are the readers who are simply too nice to be “direct” and they need to be encouraged to say what’s on their minds. Some of them are afraid of hurting my feelings, but I’d much rather hear it from my beta than hear it from a critic after the fact.

The most important quality of a beta-reader is also the toughest for any author to deal with. Honesty. My beta needs to be direct without being offensive. The focus needs to be on the writing not on me. And they often need to be brutal, no matter how distasteful. When my friend Jennifer told me she hated my lead character, she was brutally honest. She was also terrified that I’d hate her for that honesty. While it wasn’t what I wanted to hear – it was what I needed to hear. What made it easier to deal with was that Jennifer made it about the work. It wasn’t personal and there were no emotionally charged words in what she told me. Never once did she say that I failed, was unskilled, a poor writer, or that I was an amateur in my approach, or in any way unprofessional. Jennifer took the time to explain the things that were bothering her, even pointing out the places in several chapters where I had failed to make her see my character as a real person. Talk about eye-opening! While I won’t deny that it was painful, I will tell you that it was the best thing that’s ever happened to me as an author. Someone slaughtered my work, burst my bubble, tore my story to shreds, but she didn’t attack me. Now that’s a beta-reader!

A Big Day for Gunny!

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Most of my closest friends have heard me talk about a man named “Gunny” and they recognize that he is one of those guys that I adore. In my The First Sergeant on Mother’s Day post, I mentioned that there was a handful of guys who I gave away my heart to years ago and Gunny is one of them. He’s one of the men who I trust with my life. He’s also part of that small group of men that promised to bring me home in one piece.

So, why am I writing about Gunny? Well something special is going to happen Tuesday. My friend, Gunny, is going to graduate from college and I can’t be there to see it. I want to be there. I want to stand on my damn chair and scream, “Hooah, my brother! I’m so freaking proud of you!” at the top of my lungs. I wish I could take the guys along and let them do that big, deep voice, cop yell thing so that Gunny could hear us from the other side of the room and know how happy and proud we all are.

This has been no easy feat for our brother. He has fought more battles than most of us and while occasionally beat-to-hell by circumstances – Gunny has never bowed to the adversity.

I first met Gunny in ’93 at Nellis Air Force Base. He was a security police staff sergeant and a member of a rather elite unit. He has an incredible voice. It’s this rumbly, gravelly thing that starts somewhere south of baritone and can end up in the lower ranges of bass. He already knows that I have a thing for command voices so he’s probably not surprised that I’m saying it here. But, Gunny also has “the whisper.” The louder you get, the quieter Gunny can get. The next thing you know, you’re off balance from leaning in to hear what he has to say. He was known by most of the people he worked with as, “The Minister of Death.” He’d have the troops take a knee and give a tactical benediction that left more than one of us stunned by its beauty. He’s just one of the original “in case of war break glass” kind of men that I’m drawn to. And yes his wife knows that I adore him. She’s a wonderfully tolerant woman.

Gunny had already been to war by the time I came along and had more than one long-term health issue to face as a result of that mess. Please don’t try to tell me there’s no such thing as Gulf War Syndrome – there is and he’s been dealing with it. I remember seeing the man come to work in so much pain he could barely move. Joints that weren’t flexing and bones disintegrating before our eyes. Yet, the warrior was out there either doing PT or leading it. He did his time in the field even when he shouldn’t have. Gunny was a guy who signed on the line and if the job said walk ten miles with a fifty pound ruck, he wasn’t going to sit on his butt and watch everyone go by. He’d do the damn ruck, encouraging everyone else along the way. There was a job to do and Gunny was going to damn well do it.

He not only did his job then, but he kept doing it, and usually a little more – he’s a thorough guy. He steadily made rank and he kept learning and creating new things. As computers became an everyday part of our world in the military, Gunny became part of the folks that learned that skill and shared it with others. He finally retired as a master sergeant and moved on to a secondary career in personal protection. He went to the crappy places in the world and took on the job of protecting the people that were trying to rebuild the mess left behind by war. Like many others, he did more than his share, saw more than he should have, and he dealt with more than he should have had to deal with. He’ll just tell you that he was only doing his job. I think all of us heaved a sigh of relief when he came home to stay.

Gunny has spent the last several years doing what I consider to be great things. He’s built a business, married a smart, beautiful woman, and has become a father again. He’s had the doctors give him some bionic body parts to replace the crappy ones he had before, and he’s kept chugging along. Every once in awhile, we pick up the phone and talk to each other. Usually when life is beating one of us to a pulp, the other one steps in and does an intervention. We listen to each other whine, then abuse each other, and then agree that life is just pain, and what the hell – we have a high threshold. Hooah.

So now, I get to salute my friend as he completes yet another goal he set for himself all those years ago. He joined the military and said he’d be the best he could be at his job. Did that. He went to war and promised to come home. Did that. Swore he’d make Master Sergeant. Did that. Said he’d be there and take care of the person he was supposed to protect. Did that. Said he’d be the best husband and father he could. Does that every day. And he promised he’d get through college. Did that.

I couldn’t be more proud of you, Gunny. You are a man of your word and a man of honor. But I already knew that. I salute you, my brother.

Who helped along the way?

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Almost every writer gets a helping hand along the way. Besides the friends and family who are always prepared to offer a bit of loving abuse, there are others who come along and join the party. Lisa Pietsch came to me through our mutual friend, Dave D.  He’s one of my beta-readers and he suggested that I might want to talk to Lisa.  She had already published several novels in her Task Force 125 series, and Dave thought she might be able to answer some of my 101 questions.

In the course of putting us together, Dave did what he always does, and made a smart a** comment.  It turns out that Lisa and I had both worked with Dave, just not at the same time. Probably a good thing for Dave. I had been Dave’s first sergeant and Lisa was once his flight sergeant.  Being the strong minded, kick a**, military goddesses that we are – we responded to his comment by abusing him as a tag team.  Brilliant man that he is, Dave quickly gave up after a parting comment to us, “I knew you were both cut from the same cloth, one is just older!”  I’m proud to be the older one.  The adage about “old age and treachery” should come to mind.  And yes – Lisa and I are cut from the same cloth – camouflage! Make us angry and you will likely see another cloth – your death shroud.

Lisa and I had hit it off immediately as you can tell. The first time I asked her to look at a chapter for me, I was so nervous and excited that I messed up the attachment.  Instead of getting the first two chapters of Protecting Parker, she received a later chapter that was of a much more intimate nature.  I was beyond embarrassed by my faux pas, but absolutely ecstatic when she told me I wrote “good sex.” Once I got over my embarrassment, I finally managed to send her the first two chapters. Lisa didn’t pull punches. She was both honest and encouraging, confirming what I already knew – she must have been a hell of a good flight sergeant!

Lisa’s a terrific writer!  Military, action, adventure, and romance combine to provide entertaining reads.  She’s now bringing that same energy and enthusiasm into the paranormal.  She has become a generous friend who has encouraged me at every opportunity.  I’m hopeful that when we finally get together for the dinner I owe her that Dave D. will be available to join us. First so I can thank him for putting me together with Lisa, but mostly so the smart a** can serve as our personal slave.  He freely admits to everyone that Lisa and I kept him out of a lot of trouble in our time – the least he can do is post our damn bond!

Please visit Lisa at her website www.lisapietsch.com.  She’s always entertaining, often over the top, always a good read, and as I said, a generous friend.

I’ll Pass on the SEAL Bandwagon

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Dean sent me another article this week (I’m trying to write here, boss!) and jokingly asked me if I would like to consider changing the retired Marine sniper in my next novel to a Navy SEAL. According to this Washington Post article, – they are a hot commodity in the publishing world right now. Especially, in the romance genre. The last snippet on the bottom of page two is what sent both of us over the edge. “In the romance world, the competency of SEALs knows no bounds. ‘They are trained from Day 1 to notice the tiniest detail,… A man who can pick up on the smallest little nuance is bound to be able to please a woman, if you catch my drift.’”

Wow! Where can I get me one of those! Is there a part of SEAL training that they aren’t telling us about? I watch the Discovery Channel and I didn’t see that phase of training in the special. And just who the heck are the instructors for that? I somehow don’t see R. Lee Ermy screaming instructions at a SEAL candidate – if you catch my drift. And if the SEAL I take home doesn’t live up to this expectation, just how am I to get rid of this magnificent behemoth who can turn even the simplest object into a weapon? Will his failure to please me so emasculate him that he’ll turn on me with my curling iron? I could go on for quite some time, as I’m sure most of you could, with those types of questions. But, seriously, nothing like setting a guy up for failure!

Well, as always, I have a couple thoughts on the situation. The reality is that any time you are dealing with members of the Special Operations family, you are dealing with a very different group of people. These are not men who lack in confidence! These are the guys that if they say they are going to do it – do! Even if they aren’t the finest at something – they’ll make you believe they are. From street cops through the most elite of the operators, these men are trained to do a job and do it well. Those who can’t or won’t—generally don’t make it through the training.

I’ve met a few of these unique and interesting people in my time. No lies here – met and known are not the same thing. But I have sat and shared a beverage or two over the years with some of the following: SEALs, Green Berets, Rangers, Airborne, Marines, snipers, and cops as well as combat veterans from almost every conflict from the Second World War to the present. I have been fortunate enough to spend more than a few minutes with men who survived beach landings in World War II, fought in Korea, many Vietnam combat veterans, including one who survived having his position overrun, and finally several men who did tours of duty and survived attacks in Iraq. From the ground-pounders to the elite Special Ops troops, and the wrench turners to the pilots, I’ve tried to pay attention. I consider myself lucky enough to have been in the right place at the right time and had the opportunity to listen to these men talk, and to hear a small number of interesting and uncensored stories. I have also not been the least bit shy about asking some extremely personal questions of these men about their experiences.

That does not make me an expert. But what I can tell you based on my very limited experience is that none of these men wanted to be perceived as anything other than a man who did his job. They’re proud of who they are and what they’ve done, and in some cases, what they still do, and when they use the term hero, it is always about someone else.

What they should not be seen as is superheroes. Special Ops personnel are trained to perform in an environment that most of us pray we never have to face. But to assign super human characteristics to them is a dis-service that will leave these men standing on a pedestal they may not desire to be on. These guys get up every day, put on their gear, and they go do a job. They will suffer the same traumas to their body and to their soul that every other fighting man will suffer. Turning him into a superhero is simply placing an unrealistic expectation on him. Superman doesn’t show pain, suffering, emotional turmoil, or any of the one hundred other things that men who come home from war will deal with. He doesn’t suffer from PTSD, the after effects of concussion, nightmares, or flashbacks. The new expectation of this “super warrior” is that his training teaches him to be so “in the moment,” that he can walk in the door and leave all those things behind.

Fact: No one leaves it behind. The old saying, “That which has been seen, cannot be unseen!” is true. What almost all these men are capable of doing is compartmentalizing for periods of time in order to function. But eventually, every one of them will deal with their baggage.

I get it – it’s romance. A romance reader wants the hero to be “that guy.” Tall, broad, and handsome. Smart, brave, and protective. And when he’s done with all of that, he should be kind, caring, sensitive, warm, funny, and above all a great lover. It would be a huge bonus if he could cook, liked kids and dogs, and actually read a book. Are they out there? You bet! Is every SEAL, Marine, Ranger, Airborne, or cop one of them? Not even! But that’s who writers write about, because if your heroine is in danger – it is damned unlikely some fat-ass plumber is going to show up and save the day!

Now the simple fact of the matter is, I don’t know enough about how the SEALs or their teams work to write about them. That whole Navy thing is sort of beyond me – well, that and I get seasick watching Victory at Sea. I’m not currently acquainted with any SEALs or Green Berets, so I wouldn’t even try to go there in a book since I don’t have a fact checker. But, I know the Air Force and I have a multitude of friends who are Rangers, Marines, and Cops (both military and civilian), along with wrench-turners and pilots, and loads of combat veterans. I am a firm believer in the “write WHO you know” school of thought, so I’ll be sticking with my Marine in my upcoming story. Not being a romance writer – I happily leave the bandwagon full of SEALs to them.

That being said – I have no doubt that any one of those Cops, Marines, or Rangers, etc. (plus the SEALs and Green Berets that I don’t know) would be happy to be perceived as the superhero in your own romance novel. Just ask him if he’s the best and if he’s willing to give you the attention you so richly deserve. He’ll look at you with smoldering eyes as he tosses back a shot of Jack, and he’ll swear to you that he is just that guy. And given the chance – he’ll probably do his damndest to convince you. They’re confident that way.

The Group Experience

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Almost every writer I know has been part of a writer’s group at one time, and I have yet to find a writer who didn’t benefit from this experience in some way. I know that I have. I’ve belonged to several, some were great fun and some were really tough, but all of them had a part in building my skills and confidence as a writer.

My favorite local group is “officially” preparing to break up. The group is comprised of members of a genealogical society, which is closing its doors after forty plus years. Formed many years ago, each of the members in this group were interested in writing about their family history. The basic format was the same as every other writers group – write, read your work, and receive feedback from others. The ultimate goal is to improve as writers so we can leave behind a well-written, interesting family history.

There are seven of us in the group, but it’s a rare event if we all make the meetings. Marge is the captain of our tiny ship. She didn’t really want the job, but someone had to try to herd all the cats into one room for three hours each month. Funny, warm, and observant, Marge is a graduate of Stanford University and her time there has had a direct impact on how she works with us. As a well-trained student, she always listens with rapt attention and asks great questions. As a well-educated graduate, she brings all of her education, humor, and talent to beautifully crafted stories of growing up, her college years, and life as a wife and mother.

Ginny writes beautifully. She has the skill to write her family stories in such a lovely tone that even the hard times sound good. Her pieces are always an interesting mix of family history, memories, and information on the locale. I have yet to come away from one of her stories without looking forward to the next one.

Don and Ardith are our only couple. Don has a dry sense of humor that comes out in his writing and often leaves us helpless with laughter when he reads something. That’s not always what he was going for, but his frank telling of an event, combined with his wickedly funny asides as he reads his piece, does it every time. Ardith is a wonderful writer, who is able to take us on her and Don’s travels through life. She has terrific skill in describing events and the times in which they occurred. She is also still amused with Don after sixty plus years of marriage, laughing just as warmly at his stories as we do.

Barbara is probably the most productive of us in actually compiling her family history. She’s been working hard on getting everything she’s already written into book form. The pieces she brings to read usually have the pictures inserted already, so we have a great visual to go along with the story. Seeing an example of how a family history can be accomplished has inspired all of us to work harder to complete out own.

Margaret is a talented writer. Her well-crafted vignettes of her travels around the world often leave us feeling as though we’d been along for the ride. She has the rare talent of being able to clearly describe the sights, sounds, and smells of her exotic locations. The only problem I have with Margaret is that I often forget to read along. She has a beautiful speaking voice and I love to hear her read aloud. I’m absolutely convinced that my own pieces would be better if only they were being read to us by Margaret.

Over the years, we have been inspired to accomplish more than we might have simply by being with each other. Groups work best when everyone participates and all of us have felt responsible to have something prepared to read at group. We have all been through more than one painful critique when our work didn’t measure up, and we’ve all been through more than one wonderful critique when we managed to get it right. There isn’t any one of us who didn’t have areas that we needed to work on, but with the help of our friends, we have all improved tremendously. So even though we may be breaking up, none of us will be without the others. What we have shared and learned will continue to appear in elements of our writing. The words, “Tell me more. Tell me how you felt. Tell me what you saw. Take me with you,” will continue to be a mantra in my head. I know that we come away stronger for having had our time together.

We met yesterday (all seven of us) and decided that while we are “officially” finished with the Society, we are going to go on. Just seven friends still helping each other.