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I had no trouble coming up with the names for Protecting Parker. Parker Cotton came first. I needed a name for a woman that could be confused for a male name and Parker worked. Cotton simply appeared on the page as I started to type. Gray Townsend was another matter. Gray was a name I’d heard at some point and thought was cool; it was also not a name you saw every day. However, he started out as a Jenkins, but one of my friends who read the first chapters told me how much she hated the name and I swapped it to Townsend.

As for the names in Blood Link, once again, I always knew who they were. As I created the team, their names came to me. Samantha Elliott was in honor of my favorite gravelly-voiced actor, Sam Elliott. Jay Evans needed a name that was simple and strong. His nickname of Cowboy was how I saw the character – the romantic ideal of the quiet cowboy who saves the girl and loves her forever. Captain George Bigelow has the names of two officers that I worked with years ago. George from Colonel George Zaniewski and Bigelow from Lt. Col Richard Bigelow. Both were officers I respected and admired. The character is known as Bee because most of the enlisted personnel wouldn’t call him by his first name, so he would have started out as Captain Bigelow, than as they grew closer, Capt B and finally just Bee, but his parents and girlfriend would naturally call him by his given name of George.

Choosing a name for your character might be an easy item on your To-Do List, or it could be an onerous task. I do fine when I plan my book. I have a feeling about the character and a name often comes to mind. When I really run into trouble is in the middle of writing when I want to apply a name to someone I’ve given no previous thought to. The character simply appears in my head and now I need a name. The problem is that I don’t know at that moment how important or unimportant this unexpected person might be.

In writing Saving Emily, I ran into the situation that I mentioned previously – Janice goes to the gym and meets an ex-SEAL who trains personal protection specialists. I’m writing away and suddenly here is this man on my page, and he has a role to play in my primary characters development. All I had was the opening moments of their conversation on the page when I realized that I couldn’t just refer to him as “the man” or “the gym owner.” I needed a name. The character is Hispanic, handsome, tough as nails, and of course, compassionate. I didn’t want to use the what might be considered a stereotypical name such as Juan, and I couldn’t use my favorite of Diego – he’s a character in my Blood Link series.

I live in Tucson, Arizona – you’d think this would be easy, but it wasn’t.

I resorted to my favorite trick for finding a name. My friends on Facebook. One of my closest friends has the maiden name of Islas, so I stole it. I’ve always liked this name – for the non-Spanish speakers it sounds like “Eas-Las.” It’s not as generic as Hernandez or Morales and has the added bonus of being short and easy to type! For the first name, I hit her friends list and found the name Oscar. While unusual and old-fashioned as an Anglo name, Oscar is quite popular among Hispanics. I love to hear my friend pronounce it – “Oh-score” but you have to roll that “r” just the right way. Oscar Islas took off like a rocket in my head. In fact, once Oscar had a name, he suddenly had a personality and a back story. I realized that Oscar had a real role in this book and adjustments were made to accommodate his presence.

Several of my Facebook friends have large numbers of friends, so I sometimes roll in and scroll the names. I’ll pick first names from one friends list, and then go to another friend and hijack the last names from them. I hit one of my younger friends lists when I’m looking for the names for twenty-somethings.

One of the things I do is look at the most popular names for babies in the year my character was born. This is how Emily got her name.

The other place I get names is from my genealogy work. The last names of several characters have come from Mr. Scott’s family tree. Lawton, MacKenzie, and Jamison are just a few of the ones I’ve used so far. Sometimes as I’m looking at a census record from the 1850s a name jumps off the page and an entire life story pops into my head. I jot those names down for later use.

More on names to come…

Having the right name can make all the difference, but many of those choices may be driven by the genre you are working in. I often use the name Fred, maybe because I don’t know too many of them. I’m not sure why, but this is one of those names that’s always there on my list of names – I just like it. Strong and simple, only four letters, which makes it a quick type, and rather old fashioned.

But what comes to mind for a writer when we see the name Fred? First and foremost you should think about what genre you are writing. As soon as you apply the name to different genres, different images come to mind.

Romance: Can you imagine a man named Fred in the role of the romantic hero? Do you see him as a tall handsome man with all the requisite muscles and ripples? Can the name work in a love scene. “Oh, Fred. Please make love to me.” It’s not really a name that lends itself to some kind of exotic billionaire business tycoon. In fact, I’m doubtful that most women will “feel the love” for the name.

Action/Adventure: Can you imagine Fred as the rugged adventurous explorer? While it isn’t a romance, there is often a romantic element in these books so we’re back to the question of a love scene. The name has a little more potential in this genre than in the romance genre.

Military/Western: Yes, I’m aware that these are often part of the action/adventure area, but names in these genres are regarded differently. These are “manly men” who may have a real name that is used on occasion, but are often called by a rank or a nickname. Trooper Fred MacLean would simply be known as Mac or Trooper. Fred is not the name we might know him by.

Suspense/Mystery: Is he the hero or the bad guy? In these genres, the name could also be effective because the romantic element is not the primary focus of the story.

Comedy: The name Fred takes on a life of its own in this genre. As a primary character the first one that comes to mind is Frederick von Frankenstein (Froederick von Frankensteen!) in Young Frankenstein. The name has been used very successfully for secondary character for many years from Fred Mertz in I Love Lucy to a more recent favorite of Fred Weasley in the Harry Potter series.

As I said earlier, I’m a fan of the name, and I’m intrigued by the character of Major Fred Blaine in my Blood Link series. He is currently a secondary character who may eventually have his own book. My Fred is most often called “The Padre” and is an Army Chaplain, who is also a Ranger, all while existing as a vampire. The dichotomy of a warrior chaplain appeals to me – these men of course exist and are historically well documented. Add into that the complication of being a vampire and you have the type of complex character who calls out to be written. Make him an Episcopalian priest rather than a Roman Catholic and we have the potential to mess up the whole works with a love interest.

Now go back and run through those genres with a few other names: John, Ichabod, Alan, Ezekiel, Derek, Bob, Dick, Hank, Harry, William, or Hugh. You can have a field day with some of them, but the reality is that certain names work better in certain genres.

I swear it’s even tougher to find a woman’s name sometimes. More on that later.

27 days, 26 chapters, 63,750 words later – the novel tentatively titled Saving Emily is ready to pass off to my beta readers. The term complete is a long, long way away. There will no doubt be dozens of questions and comments from the betas and then will come the re-writes and the self-editing. Odds are this book won’t make it into the hands of an editor for close to three months – and that’s only if the betas think it’s worth a darn. Just because I think it’s good, doesn’t mean that it will pass the first round of critical reads.

So, how do I feel about the NaNoWriMo challenge? [Sorry – I still think NaNoWriMo sounds like something we should shoot as it’s charging across the Serengeti.] I’m pretty stoked to have accomplished it and have what I think may be a pretty decent first draft. I learned some important things by doing the NaNo.

Before the challenge:
1. A well-developed story plan is essential. Not that you’re going to follow it precisely, but it certainly helps to know where you’re going.
2. Know your characters and take the time to write a short biographical sketch. I had to keep referring back to certain things because I simply couldn’t remember everything. I kept forgetting the last name of one of my characters.
3. A chapter timeline is essential for me. I kept mine open and updated it constantly. Since my story timeline is very tight, I had to pay close attention to what was happening and when. This prevented me from having those annoying issues with “sequencing.” I once read a book in which the hero sat down to an evening meal where there were fireflies, while something bad was happening to a kid in school at recess. That’s the type of thing that make me insane as a reader.
During the challenge:
4. Don’t make the daily word count your nemesis. I figured out early that working on a weekly word count was less stressful for me. Some people like the idea of the small bite, but 1667 words a day can be their own little nightmare. I did have days where I couldn’t manage 800 words. But I didn’t panic because my weekly goal was always attainable.
5. Set the bar high. It’s been my experience that people live up to the expectations placed upon them. I made sure to proclaim my goals here on my website and also to all my friends. The continuous encouragement made a huge difference. Knowing that they were watching also made a difference.
6. Don’t waste a lot of your primary writing time self-editing. Make a note about what you need to fix and move on. I have a sheet of paper where I just jot down the stuff as I think of it. I do my primary writing in the morning and then in the evening I generally go back and read things over. This is frequently when I will take care of the notes I made during the day.
7. Write the scene that’s in your head. It doesn’t matter if it’s out of sequence – if you know what happens to your character at a certain point get it down on paper before you lose it.
After the challenge:
8. Don’t be discouraged if you didn’t make it. This year was not my first attempt. I’d tried several times in the past and did not even get close. In fact, I’d quit without even reaching 15,000 words the last two times that I tried.
9. Don’t throw away anything or delete it. Use it to put together a plan and set your new goals.
10. Remember above all else – this is just a challenge! You have to live in the real world and accomplish real things. Those are what matter!

Question: Would I do it again?
Answer: Yes!

It’s Day 25 of NaNo and something strange has happened. The first draft is on the page. No, it is not complete and ready for my beta readers yet, but I reached the end of the storyline right at 61,000 words. [Insert a happy dance here!]

I still have five days of NaNo left, but as I pointed out – I’m not finished. This is simply getting things down on the page and making it from point A to point B. And while much of it is written the way I’d like, there are many places that I will now need to go back and do some work. I can think of spots in the story where I knew what I wanted done, but was tired and didn’t say exactly what I wanted to say. Other times, I was racing ahead with the story, simply getting from here to there. Rather than lose the thought, I wrote something in shorthand and moved on.

An example of this would be when I was trying to get to a rather important emotional moment in the book. The image directly in front of that one is no less important than the coming scene; however, I had the other scene in my head and I needed to get it down before I lost it. What I wrote in haste, “Janice knew she was running out of steam, but kept moving.” What I really see in my head is, “Janice’s pace slowed as the exhaustion, loss of blood, and adrenalin drain, ate through the small reserves of strength she was operating on. She focused on placing one foot in front of the other, her eyes on the road ahead, knowing that if she stopped, she may not be able to start again.”

There are many bits like that one in the book that will require some attention. There are also more than a few spots where I wrote something like, “Mac knew she wouldn’t like that.” Now I have to say how or why Mac knew she wouldn’t like whatever the hell it was. Otherwise, it will sound as though Mac is omniscient. I will also have to look at all those big words and make sure I’ve used them correctly. Of course, I’ll have to look at all the little words while I’m at it. Sometimes, my fingers are so used to typing “know” that they go there even though I’m trying to say “knob.” The worst is not hitting the “t” in “the.” Spell check is fine with the word “he” even out of context.

Over the next five days, the manuscript will probably grow a little and I expect it will finish between 63,000 and 65,000 words. I’m find with that. [See – I wind up with find when I meant fine] When I finish, I’ll post the final chapter schedule so you can see how it came out compared to the original. I may also try to write a better description. I’m simply not good at those darn things.

Thanks for following along. I’ll keep you posted.